This is so fine... what a cool song arrangement... I love it...

Hi, Lynn,
 
I remember this very cool song from a while back, and although I missed the first mix of the new version, this current mix sounds fantastic!
 
The song has a really unique vibe, excellent playing and vocals, and the instrumentation in the mix sounds really great with everything sounding nice and crisp, and in it's own space.
 
Great song and excellent mix, Lynn, very well done!
Bob

Cool tune Lynn. Lots of good stuff happening in there. I thought the vocal melody was great over the other instruments.

Very well done.

sja

I remember this song and was happy to listen again, lowend sound punchy and robust to me...great stuff Lynn. - Shawn

Mark, I really appreciate you kind comments.  You've been doing pretty well for yourself, too.

John, after listening to you latest productions, I have to pay you your respects.  I'd like to know what kind of headphones you are using so that I can hear it like you do.  I did run the vocal through a light chorus that spreads the vocal over the center of the stereo field.  Rather than use my harmonic exciter, I boosted the EQ  @ 5kz to avoid harshness.  As for the percussion, it could come up a db or two.  Thank you for you insightful and detailed analysis.

Frank, honestly, your own production skills have impressed and influenced me several times.  I'm just trying to keep it as organic as you seem to do effortlessly.

Bob, the same thing I said about Frank applies to you, as well.  Your consistency is what I hope to achieve.

Scott,  thanks for dropping in and contributing with your kind words.  We may be neighbors, as I live in the Emerald City.

It is a very interesting piece and it sounds great!  I would lower the vocals just a tad bit.  Yeah, it has some Genesis or Pink Floyd influences. 

Shawn, thanks for the comments about the low end.  That was my first concern, and after the first few comments, I was pointed in the right direction.  Your contribution is valuable to me.

Vicente, thanks for taking the time to listen and comment.  I appreciate your observation on the vocal level.  My goal is to have it just barely sit above the instruments so it won't get drowned out.  I'll be listening to this more carefully the next time I pull it up.

I must have missed V1 of this.  If it was just about a year ago, that was when I was making my big cross country move.

Though I can't compare, I can say that I really enjoyed this version.  Really good song that was well arranged and performed.  The mix sounded just fine to me.

Philz, that's what I was hoping to hear.  Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment.  The first few comments steered me well.

Although I do not know the first version, the new version sounds just great to me. The vibe reminds me a bit of Thomas Dolby's "the flat earth" - it combines organic with electronic music in a very natural way!