Tony, thanks for having a listen.  Don't worry about a work ethic - I know how hard it is setting up a new studio because I did just that last year.  I'm looking forward to hearing your songs.

hi lynn well done love your songs mix vocals very creative thanks eric

Listened to the remastered version. Great song and arrangement. Really enjoyed it. So many good songs around here.

Cool song Lynn.

The original sounds excellent to me, and James's mastering job is the icing on the cake.

Great stuff.

I've been away from the forum lately because of personal matters, but I want to tell you all how much I appreciate your time and comments.  James did a fabulous job on this song, and I'm grateful for his generosity.  I learned much from this, and yet again, I'm amazed at how great this forum is.

eric paul


hi lynn well done love your songs mix vocals very creative thanks eric

chasmcg


Listened to the remastered version. Great song and arrangement. Really enjoyed it. So many good songs around here.

SteveStrummerUK


Cool song Lynn.

The original sounds excellent to me, and James's mastering job is the icing on the cake.

Great stuff.

Great song!!! 
Sounds like it was mixed with KRK Rockit 8's.  Don't be afraid of them...experiment with lots of mixes and different types of songs and get to know to how they translate. Don't be afraid to add some low end to the mix either. It took countless mixes for me to get proficient at mixing with my Dynaudio monitors.

I like the original one the best Lynn , not stepping on James Yo Yo I just like the first version .

James

Hi Scotty, I'm glad you liked the tune.  It'll take a while to get used to the Rokits, but I'm plugging away.  The jury's still out on them, but they're a vast improvement over my old Alesis.  My VRM box has been a big help, as well.

James, thanks for stopping by and taking a listen.  My latest mix has some of the low mids scooped out like Jamesyoyo's, but not as compressed.  This whole project has been an enormous learning experience for me.

This is a frikin awesome song Lynn. Really good. The mix is pretty good, with the exception of one of the toms riding on the bass in the upper range that is fatiguing. It is exasperated by James' mastering, though overall James did tighten up the mix nicely otherwise. IMO that area really needs to be addressed to warm up and complete this stellar song. Really enjoyed that, thank you.

Lynn


Hi Scotty, I'm glad you liked the tune.  It'll take a while to get used to the Rokits, but I'm plugging away.  The jury's still out on them, but they're a vast improvement over my old Alesis.  My VRM box has been a big help, as well.

James, thanks for stopping by and taking a listen.  My latest mix has some of the low mids scooped out like Jamesyoyo's, but not as compressed.  This whole project has been an enormous learning experience for me.

I shopped for some monitors to play my Motif through and ended up buying Mackie MR5 monitors. I did a side by side comparison with the Rockits, the Mackies won out with a tighter response. They were only about $120 each after discount. I found the Rockits to be muddy in the low and low mid range. Maybe the filters weren't set properly on the ones I tried out, who knows?