After the highly acclaimed Digital Photograph  here is another dance tune, this time with a lot more build up... and the most ever envelopes in a project of mine.  Volume at 10!!! Or whatever is the highest setting you have.
 
https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-engelenhoven/climb-to-the-top
 
As always all comments are welcome!

Hmmmm, no comments at all... is the tune THAT bad or did everyone miss it...?

I'm not much into dance music. Just my observations as a listener.
For me, the intro was a bit long with not much happening. I would have started the song around the 34 second point. That gives the pad a few seconds before the kick starts.
Then there is a dramatic drop in level both volume and energy at 44 seconds.... just as you get ready to jump up and dance, it goes low energy and mellow. Around 2 minutes in, it finally hits the level it needs to be with the kick earlier...
 
I like it at 2:45 but again.... not so much the fade to zero before it. Stop it dead in it's tracks for a split second  YES... but not a fade. Then a repeat of the fade at 3:45... then it fades to mellow.....
 
As an Artistically creative project, I think you did a good job, nice synths and well constructed,  but if this is to be a dance song..... nope, I think it missed that mark.

Thanks for listening, Guitarhacker, and the honest and detailed comments!