Sounds good James, if you could send me the track for the guitar without the FX on it I wouldn't mind seeing what I can add to it just to give you an idea as to what you might possibly be able to add to it.
Sound good like it is, I'm just saying I know your having trouble with FX and I'd be more than happy to see if I could figure it out. That's the great thing with VST's and recoirding, you have the option using the raw sound of always changing things.
Either way, I thought it sounded good, it's not easy I know. Sometimes inspiration takes over, sometimes hard work pays off and sometimes you just have to knuckle up and say ok this is what I've got for now I hope ya like it but if not I' can take the critics for my efforts and learning process.
Your getting there James, Learn every note on the guitar, that's my advice, when practicing scales hum them or say AH - EEEEE - or OOOOOOH- it helps with recognition and also can help your voice build if you wanna sing later on. I wish I would have done all that starting out playing the guitar.
Either way, Keep up the good work buddy, just make sure and have some fun with what your doing from time to time and not be so serious on everything!!
Bobby