I have no issues except a slight de-tuning effect at the beginning.  I think a little more bottom end of the vocals would be good, you've got a good voice for this genre.   Some cool little things on the bass there.  Rockin' lead break dude.  I would opt for either a fade out or fast run up to a solid cut off on the ending... but that's me.  Sounds very good.

Daryl

Bob , I'm listening on speakers & everything I'm hearing sounds true to Genre.
Nice fat guitars ....really dig what you did effex wise on the vox ..
punchy drums ..the gtr solo has a nod to older  EVH tones 
Good Track ...you do this type of thing very well 


Kenny

CreatingNoise:
 
 
Hey, Tony,
 
 
How's it going, brother?  It's really great to hear from you!
 
Thanks so much for checking this out for me and for your very encouraging comments!
 
I'm planning to do a little minor tweaking and post the remix soon.  I always look forward to and greatly appreciate your input because your Distant Towers stuff always sounds top notch!
 
I'm looking forward to hearing some stuff from your upcoming fourth DT CD soon!
 
Thanks again, Tony, and please tell Tom I said hello!
Bob
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Serious_Noise!:
 
 
Hey, Bobby,
 
 
Thanks, buddy, I really appreciate you giving this song a listen, and also your very kind words!
 
I'm still using Sonar PE 8.5 and Line 6 POD Farm 2.55 to record, although I'm still thinking about making the upgrade to X2 sometime in the future, when all the X2 bugs are worked out.
 
You've been posting some dynamite rockers lately, Bobby, very nice work, keep 'em coming!
 
Thanks again, and have a good one!
Bob
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CLEAN:
 
 
Hey, Mark,
 
Thank a lot, buddy, I appreciate you taking time to check it out and your kind comments!  I always look forward to your input and value it highly.
 
Your latest Pugtones post with Warren is excellent, good stuff!
 
Thanks again, Mark, I'm grateful that you like the song and appreciate your support!
Bob
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Hi Bob , as always you always turn rocks into boulders with a shattering tones of Hard kick ass rock !

Sounded good to me , I felt the earth move buddy !

James

Hi there Bob

I love this my friend
 
Your vocals are excellent and the guitar playing sublime.
 
Rock on!

vechung:
 
 
Hi, Vicente:
 
 
How are you, my friend?  Hope you're doing great!
 
Thank you very much for giving this a listen, and also for your very kind words, I always look forward to and greatly appreciate your input and observations!
 
I'm happy that you enjoyed the 'frenzied" solo, too, it was sort of a quick and dirty fast take to blow off a little bit of steam.
 
I'm very grateful that you enjoyed the song, and for your friendship and support, Vicente.
 
Best wishes!
Bob
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batsbrew:
 
 
Hey, Rob,
 
 
Thanks, buddy, I really appreciate you checking it out and your very good detailed observations, and kind words!
 
Yep, I made the mistake of experimenting with my "usual" bass EQ settings while also trying out a new preamp, and it just caused a bit of a difference in both guitar and bass tone and gain staging.  As I mentioned above, I think a little more EQ tweaking will hopefully tighten up the low end on the guitars and bass, and get things back into my "normal" ballpark.
 
Thanks again for giving it a listen and your good input, your stuff always sounds amazing, and I value your input very highly.
 
Have a good one!
Bob
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philz:
 
 
Hey, Phil,
 
It's really great to hear from you, buddy, I hope your doing well!
 
Thank you very much for giving this a listen, and for your good input and encouraging words!
 
I appreciate you taking time to check it out even though you're traveling, and it's always good to get observations from all types of listening environments and playback systems.  Thank you for the very kind comments and also your friendship and support here on the forum, it truly means a great deal to me!
 
Safe travels, Phil!
Bob
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darylcrowley:
 
 
Hi, Daryl,
 
How are you, buddy?  Hope you're having a rockin' weekend!
 
Thanks very much for checking this song out for me, and for your good input and words of encouragement!
 
Yes, Sir, I was experimenting a little bit with a new piece of gear and my gain staging suffered a bit, and still needs a little bit of tweaking.  I'm hoping to finally be able to get back to this for some EQ and mix adjustments in the next few days, and will post the remix soon.
 
Thanks again, Daryl, have a good one!
Bob
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kennywtelejazz:
 
 
 
Hey, Kenny,
 
How's it going, brother?  Hope you're doing great!
 
Thanks so much for giving this "quickie" a listen for me, and for your good input, observations, and very kind words!
 
I really appreciate you taking time to check it out and comment, and your opinion means a great deal to me.
 
Your latest video post was truly smokin' hot with dynamite playing throughout, great stuff, Kenny!
 
Thanks again, buddy, and have a rockin' weekend!
Bob
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Great stuff as usual Bob.

My inner head wants to hear more "Frenzy" when the line occurs. Like carry the echo out more or harmonize it or a combination of both or something.

Still, really strong song and performance.

Very powerful sounding production - drums are the best sounding I think I have heard from you. Great job overall.
 
 Any crits ? Well, I would maybe introduce something over the intro after a couple of bars - maybe just some high pitch feedback, noise type of thing (technical guitar terms there !) as it feels a tad long as is and on the last "frenzy" of the choruses I would suggest some adding some delay so it carries over a little where the rest drops down.

I commented on this on an earlier post and tonight i listened to it about three more times. I really like this song man! I wish i could mix this song, not because i think i could do better, just because i really like the song!! i love the bone crushing guitars!