Nice song Janet , lyrics tell a story with a touch of darkness and uplifting .

Great job !

thepogue


great work both of you!..sooo very proud....great stuff.

    That is the part that warms my heart. We gave and we
tried. I'm so proud of Janet. She says I brought the song
to life and maybe so but she wrote it.

jimmyman


  I want to give each and everyone of you a huge heartfelt
thank you. Maybe Janet will pitch in with some notes
of her own. I prefer a personal thanks to each of you
but I don't want to hog the show.

The very important thing for me is to know what your
views are and short of some minor suggestions they
are all saying well done.

  One person mentioned a "big" production and I can see
that as an option I didn't want to take it too far as to
the have the production mean more than the song.

Thanks everyone

Jimmy, if you don't mind? Since others have been thanked "personally?" I would like for you to thank me "personally?"
 
You're welcome (in advance ;-)

ShadDOH

jimmyman


  I want to give each and everyone of you a huge heartfelt
thank you. Maybe Janet will pitch in with some notes
of her own. I prefer a personal thanks to each of you
but I don't want to hog the show.

The very important thing for me is to know what your
views are and short of some minor suggestions they
are all saying well done.

  One person mentioned a "big" production and I can see
that as an option I didn't want to take it too far as to
the have the production mean more than the song.

Thanks everyone

Jimmy, if you don't mind? Since others have been thanked "personally?" I would like for you to thank me "personally?"
 
You're welcome (in advance ;-)

   Yes a personal thanks in in order because we all
want to be acknowledged. You are such an extreme
talent and a vocalist to be recond with. Good ears
great skill and the list of qualities goes on and on.

 I'm not just saying things. You are a talent.

  Thank you for the remarks    

:-) MILLIONS OF PEOPLE LOOK AT THIS BOOK EVERYDAY!! THIS IS THE KIND OF SPONTANEOUS PUBLICITY!! YOUR NAME IN PRINT!! THAT MAKES PEOPLE!! I'M IN PRINT!!!! THINGS ARE GOING TO START HAPPENING TO ME NOW!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4rVuZ0hJEyM

Just got thru listening to this.. I really could care less about the mix..This is such a heart-felt song (music, lyrics, and performance) and it really touches the inner being IMO. I took this for what it was meant to be... My applause Jimmy & Janet. Beautiful!

Larry

Janet and Jimmy,
Beautiful song.  Sounds like a home run.  Every base has been tagged...song, arrangement, performance, and mix.
Very nice!

  Guitartrek
       Thank you.
  Bob Oister
      I'm so proud of Janet
  Gamblerschoice
      You caught a little issue in the mix? No your not
going crazy. good ears
   Scottytunes
     You must drive a GMC :-)
   Janet
       You wrote a good song? yeah miracles never cease
    Mgh
      Yeah the song would sound good in a big
concert type environment. Maybe once Janet
gets her vocals warmed up she'll do a concert for us.
    Freddy J
      Glad you like the lyrics (janet's that is)
    LpMike75
      You like the acoustic? Thanks. It's only about
a 100 dollar guitar. But I like it. thanks
     Timidi
   Thank you
     MannyNY
    you said:
       "a perfect blend of a simple but sweet melody and touching heartfelt lyrics" Janet has a way with words huh? thanks
     Alegria
       You how how much I thank you
     Wookie
      you said nicely written, Yep janet did that
     Guitarhacker
      thanks
     BIABDude
      thank you
     Clean
     thanks
     Jonbouy
     Thanks for commenting. I thought about going with
a bigger chorus build. but called it done after a certain
point. doing this song really drained me. Like running
a marathon.
    Evadianepug
      you said
       "And to think I offered to help you with lyrics.  You certainly don't need any help"
      I had to laugh when I read that. Janet wrote a song!!!!
    Blipp
      Thanks, glad you like the acoustic
    Tap
    Maybe someday that demo she sent me might be worth
millions. I feel honer'd she even let me here it.
   ThePogue
     Thank you
    James 125
   yes her lyrics do tell a great story
    DOH
      thanks
    SMB
    you said
    Just got thru listening to this.. I really could care less about the mix..This is such a heart-felt song (music, lyrics, and performance) and it really touches the inner being IMO. I took this for what it was meant to be... My applause Jimmy & Janet. Beautiful!

Larry
.........................
     thanks
    NoHow
    you said:
    Janet and Jimmy,
Beautiful song.  Sounds like a home run.  Every base has been tagged...song, arrangement, performance, and mix.
Very nice!
......................
    I have to laugh about a funny thought :-)
 What will she do now? :-) but then again if she did it
once I'm sure she'll do it again :-)

   To all
   I hope I didn't miss anyone. thanks everyone
who has remarked so far.

Thank you so much, James, Larry and Rick!  :-) 

I'm going to listen again! Man Jimmy, your vocals are absolutely perfect for this. Really "chilling". Please explain how you got that tone on the bass? How did you get it to punch and ring like that? Do you have an external cab that's exciting the strings?
 
By the end of this song, I was like Meg in this clip..
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Banging the table with my hands and everything!