Have a new piece here that I like but wanted some feedback on. Should I continue on or dump it? Brutal truth please. 


SONG TITLE: 15 in 4


http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12320869&q=hi&newref=1

small bump

with no doubt: continue! how can you want to dumb this? it has a very nice alice-in-chains feel to it. I wud like this to be finished!

stay on course. 

Seriously...Why on earth would you think about dumping this?  I was prepared to be brutally honest to.

mping this?  I was prepared to be brutally honest to.

haha thanks for the comment. I don't know, I guess I hear my own stuff but am never sure if the good things I'm hearing translate for another person. All I'm looking to do with my music is create a mood. We all know that feeling when a song starts and we mentally go into that place, those old memories or that fell good feeling. This song did that for me and I wanted to know if "some" of the mood translates.


Thank you again. I appreciate you all taking the time to even look at my post. I really do appreciate it and look forward to hearing your stuff. 

I see potential here. I would suggest picking up the tempo a bit or adding some enhanced rhythms to give it a livelier back drop. The vocals can carry the mood.

Definitely Continue!!