Call it Glory just a loop at the moment, 
so don't listen if you only like full Length. 
I know it's far away from being full track
but i would like to hear what you think of that kind of style 
and of course on the mix. 

https://soundcloud.com/skeletor-beats/glory
 
Thanx

I think that it offers nothing exciting yet.  I'm sure that will change once you have more "thingys" added.  Mix seems a bit flat to me.  I'm not a mix guy so it's hard for me to explain  that.  Maybe someone else will have the same idea and explain it better.

thanks Warren


10 hours without a pause (not clever)
i should better stop posting raw material.
after reading your post i listened to it again
and i gotta admit that the instruments were not placed good enough,
they have to be redefined
and some notes were missing 
because of that the loop has not the right dynamics (Swing)
but i am sure i can fix it.
Oh and the drums....
well i did use a standard drum kit and lifting it up was very hard.
Maybe i should replace the kick and snare with some better ones.

and the vox samples are missplaced. 
they should make it more intressting but the oppisite was the case.
i should better write songs again instead of creating beats for a while

long story short

i will remove the link to this version.

Thanks 

I certainly wasn't intending for you to remove your track.  You probably should have let some others listen and see if they could give specifics  to you.  I don't have a problem with short samples.  It's a decent way to get some advice before you go too far.  Anyway, I hope to hear it again when you are ready. 

Warren you were just HONEST to me, so it is all good ;-)

You are absolutly right,
it is really a decent way to get some advice before going to far.

this is one of the main reasons why i post and ask for some feedback.




i removed the link because i did notice too many mistakes after listening 
to it again.


i will put back the link 
and let's see what other listeners say. 

once again thanx for being honest.


All the Best

Well, I just had a listen and think there are a lot of possibilities for what you have going so far. By itself it has no bearing for me, but then you have called it a sample, and so it is. If you have something in mind, then pursue those avenues and put it all together. Try to spread things out in the mix so nothing shares the same space, In mastering use your choices wisely. You have some good things going on here and so keep it going.

Peace and blessings, John

thanx John did not have much time for improving things, for making music at all. now i am back and have done some lill improvements such as spreading things and cleaning the sounds. Once again thanx for the constructive crtism and sorry for the late reply All the Best SK

I think it is a good start.  Usually ideas come up as I play with the mix along the way.  Sometimes I myself over do it.  

Thanx Vicente i know what to do but I ask myself if are people going to like that Over doin things is good after few days i hear things much more clear ;-) Once again a Big thank you.