Hi, im still new to recording and mixing, so i kept this short so i do not mess up a lot. I appreciate all your comments. https://soundcloud.com/jozhob/hope  

First off, welcome to the forum. You have posted a pretty decent piece of work here for being new to the recording and mixing adventure. I thought you did a very nice job at putting this together for a newbie. Just keep focusing on what you would like to accomplish and you will do just fine. Very nice and unique piece.

Peace and blessings, John

Cool piece. Very Kansas-like. I sensed some timing issues in the beginning but it seemed to shore up fine after the intro. Mix sounds good as far as I can tell.

Thank you John and Scott, im very happy that you liked it. That gives me a push to continue trying to improve.

I got sonar from one and a half years, but did not have much time to work on it, i spend more time reading this forum (daily) and i like the people here.  Now i'm trying to focus more on recording and I'm taking some piano lessons because i do not have any idea about music theory.

I felt some wrong timing at first and then got used to it, i should not have kept it. 

Joseph 

    
 

I enjoyed this - some little timing issues but really well put together and I'd love to hear it develop some more (it faded out before it could get engrossing)

Cheers,
Terry.

Thank you Terry. I appreciate your comments and your time for listening to me.
 

I like this piece, too.  You're on the road to becoming a good producer.  Welcome to the forum, and don't be a stranger.

Thank you Lynn, I'm very happy that you liked it