https://soundcloud.com/tony_jay/goodbye Hey guys and gals!!! Hope everyone enjoys this song. It sang by me of course,but this time it is in English!!!! Finally something you guys can enjoy and understand since all my song most of you people heard were in Spanish. But this time it different Let me know what you guys think. P.S Credits goes to B.KEY he is played the Guitar solo.

dear Tony, thanks for sharing! I must admit, the whole R&B or Rap-thing is not my cup of tea, so maybe I am not the right person to review. But my first impression I had when I listened was that it almost sounded like a persiflage, like "show me your genitals" by jon lajoie. but I must say that I liked the arrangment of the end, when the music stopped and your "bye-ye-ye" was the only thing on the track. nice arrangement idea.

 Hi Tony,

 I liked the use of the synth tones and the arpeggio behind the melody. Your guitarist is quite good. I was almost surprised that the vocals were not autotuned as many go for that kind of sound with this kind of music. The vocals were pretty good.

 The structure of the song and the lyrics seems like something you put a lot of time in putting together. I think you have a nice song here.

Much better sound than the last one of your songs I listened to. Know the vocals are up front and the instrumentation is spread out into their own space. Nicely done.

Peace and blessings, John

hey use a vst to spread the vox. it is called waves

This is right up my alley!  Love it.  The vocals sound a little dry, need some (more?) reverb on them.  It will help them sit in the mix better.  I like how they are really clear though.  You are a really good singer!!!  I love the echo effect you put on some of the vocals at just the right time.  I also like the synths used a lot.  Loved this song, thanks for posting it!

I really like this tune. You've gotten a lot better on your English singing vocals. I can't help on the Mix, I am a amateur at best on mixing, but it sounds good to me!!  

Bobby 

Way to go, Tony.  This should calm the critics that don't like singing in Spanish.  Your voice is quite good, and it comes through loud and clear, which is appropriate for this style.  Color me impressed!