A new Song I've been working on for a week or so... 
any suggestions, advice or feedback would be welcomed... Thanks...  
edit: remixed on 4/18
 
"The Eyes Of A Child"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=769187&songID=12269399&showPlayer=true 
  
 

I forgot to mention,,, this song was co-written with my good friends Steve McMahan & Dave Adkins... 
 

Sounds good so far. Hurry up and finish it, would ya? 

WOW!! Now that was just awesome Frank and what singing from the heart. I'm thinking that the piano could go down just a tad and the synth come up just and tad. That's just my opinion, as you know what you are looking for. Regardless, this is a beautiful song and I enjoyed it just as it is. Vey nicely composed, crisp and clear for sure.

Peace and Blessings, John

Absolutely great song!!!!!!!! Can't say enough good things about this!! 

Just a slight suggestion, maybe a little bit of drum high hat click sounds at times and some building crash cymbals in parts. 

Send me a mp3 mixdown take and even though I ain't no drummer I would be more than happy to show you what I am talking about. 

LOVE THIS SONG!!!!!!!!!! PERFECT!!!!! just no cymbals............ 

FREAKING AWeSOME!!! 

Bobby

Thanks Scotty... Hopefully I'll add a few more parts next week...
After I'm through with all my wife's "honey-do's"

Thanks John... I'm planing to add some orchestration and bass/drums... when I get time... Thanks for the FB...

Hi Bobby... welcome back to the forum... I appreciate the listen and advice... I have a few things in mind for this piece... hopefully soon... Thanks...

Mister Notnat, you were born to do this sir. It gives me an Elton John vibe at the beginning because of the piano, and the way it's being played (which is well...)

I've spent a lot of time chasing the dollar? But it's usually been tucked in to an undergarment... And technically she wasn't a child? But close? 

You work with some talented people down there in LA. People have tried to get me to perform live with them and I always say no, if it was an opportunity to perform with you? I would jump at it. You are just really ****ing good IMO. 

Well done! Beautiful playing and singing.

Regards,
Dan

I like very much this  beautiful song .. good playing and singing

The Band19


Mister Notnat, you were born to do this sir. It gives me an Elton John vibe at the beginning because of the piano, and the way it's being played (which is well...)

I've spent a lot of time chasing the dollar? But it's usually been tucked in to an undergarment... And technically she wasn't a child? But close? 

You work with some talented people down there in LA. People have tried to get me to perform live with them and I always say no, if it was an opportunity to perform with you? I would jump at it. You are just really ****ing good IMO. 

Thanks Robby,,,, you never know... it could happen...