Well, I stuck with it to the end. It was creative but really didn't hold my attention till the end, but that is just me and so don't take that wrong. Nice clean and clear sounding but seems to lack attention getters in various places. It seems to have just one backing track with other stuff thrown into the mix, but this wouldn't be my genre and so I'm not sure what you are after. The production was very creative though, but I think if you add a bit of additional instrumentation and excitement to this it could be more interesting to listen to. Great start to something way bigger. Nice work, and keep this going.
Peace and blessings, John