@Blipp Thank you for listening nice to hear that you enjoyed it. are you talking about something like this??? http://soundcloud.com/skeletor-beats/dedicated Vocals??? Yep i hope that's going to be the next stage but before vocals i need to clean up the mix first.

another update i am sorry it is only another lill update. gotta work on a new project now some feedback would be nice

Cool idea - but feels incomplete. The mix needs a lot of work - I really wouldn't know where to start. The drums are very weak. Keep working on it - a lot of potential with this.

I'm used to hearing riffs from you, and, instead, you've given us a complete song to digest.  That's cool!  This is on the way to becoming a good song, but, as others have said, the drums are the weak link.  When you advertise "Home of Bone Crushing Beats" then you need some bone crushing beats in the music.  I think that's all you need for a good mix.  Best to you.

first of all thank you very much for listening and leaving such kind feedbacks. and i have to say sorry for my late reply but i have trouble with my cellphone accesing this page and writting something. @ Clean thanx Incomplete? Yes that's what i am thinking too. Mix needs to get cleaned up??? Yes but just a lill bit. otherwise the swing and the feel would get lost. Where to start??? Maybe you have already noticed i put a couple of samples in for giving you a overview of the structure. (Songwriters) :-) once again thanx @Lynn Hello Lynn nice to hear that from you :-) yep riffs but all what you have heard from me up to now They are all expandeble like this one here. it's all about sorting things correctly inside of Sonar because if i want to change something Like structure, rhytmic, or etc etc... i am able to do it easily :-) music playing it self takes only a min but the rest hurts but as WE KNOW No sweet without sweat. when it comes to my new signature home of Bone crushing Beats (aka Judge Freddy Dredd aka Skelet to the Bone), all i can say is I have been already working on a new Bone Crushing Beat :-) Once again thank you very much Lynn You are really a very kind proffesional musician and i really i mean really apriaciate your criticism. and of course I'll listen again to the drums but this time closer with more atttention and will try to get it a bit punchier. ;-) All the Best to you SK