It's been a policy for quite awhile to warn of graphic lyrics. You are new so I'm sure you didn't know. First of all, welcome to the forum. The music is not what I usually listen to but you are going in the right direction, production wise on The Start. The other tune really threw me. I quit listening. It might have been what you are shooting for but it sounded kinda jumbled to me. Again, not my favorite genre to listen to so I don't know it well at all. Anyway, welcome!