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2013/04/07 10:46:28
Serious_Noize!
Nevermind............................................. 
2013/04/07 11:12:31
THE NIGHT FOX

DANG Bobby did they just lay my eggs I was going to eat today ! LOL

Nice guitar playing !
James
2013/04/07 15:38:48
blipp
Love your vocals Bobby as they prove i'm not the worst vocalist on this forum.

Your guitar playing, however, rocks as much as it ever did, and that's a lot.

Keep on rockin' mate.
2013/04/08 03:53:27
theguitarplayer
Bobby, Chicken soup, Wow!! Great guitar work and everything else fits the song good. The vox need a touch of something, sounds off key in spots (not that I'm a great singer myself), but other than that sounds great. Rock on!! Nice jamm.

Peace be with you. Blessings, John
2013/04/08 17:45:38
philz
Good tune, Bobby, and your guitar playing is awesome as always.  Now, if we could just get your vocals to be 1/2 as good as your guitar work, you'd be home free.  From what I could hear, it sounds like you've got a pretty good voice, but your singing well off pitch.  I wish I could give you some easy tip to correct that, but I just don't know what that might be.  All I can say is good for you for putting it out there, and keep on trying... maybe look into getting a vocal coach, assuming you really want to sing.  All this strictly intended as friendly advice.
2013/04/09 11:40:49
Lynn
I have to agree with Philz on the brilliance of the guitar, but the  vocal is close, but no cigar.  I think, though, that it's a simple fix with pitch correction software.    Your voice, itself, sounds fine for this song, but it's just a phrase or two away from perfection.  It's worth looking into.
philz


Good tune, Bobby, and your guitar playing is awesome as always.  Now, if we could just get your vocals to be 1/2 as good as your guitar work, you'd be home free.  From what I could hear, it sounds like you've got a pretty good voice, but your singing well off pitch.  I wish I could give you some easy tip to correct that, but I just don't know what that might be.  All I can say is good for you for putting it out there, and keep on trying... maybe look into getting a vocal coach, assuming you really want to sing.  All this strictly intended as friendly advice.



2013/04/10 08:52:35
Guitarhacker
Bobby, your playing has really come along nicely. 

I recall telling you sometime back to not be afraid to sing the songs. Good to hear you putting it out like that. 



The basic quality and uniqueness of your voice is there. It's totally acceptable in rock.  Unless you are Bob Dylan though, you want to sing in tune a bit better. So......the vocals can use a bit of touch up to bring them up a few steps and make that song so much better.

There is one tool you need to add to the gear you have. Buy Melodyne Editor.  It isn't cheap but it works wonders. With it, you will be totally amazed at what it can do for the pitchy and warbly vocals.  You can easily use it to pull the drifting or off pitch notes closer or dead on the right note with very little to no artifacts. You can also correct the other aspects that are"off" in the vocal track. 

I have to use it on my vocals all the time. Sometimes more than others. Even the pro's use it to fix the glitches in their singing. I use it on the guest singers on my music as well. I even use it on musical instruments from time to time. It's quicker to pop ME into the FX bin to fix a bad guitar note than it is to grab the guitar and punch in the right note in a new recording session. 

Keep at it and look into ME, and it will take what you can do with vocals to a whole new level. 
2013/04/10 10:26:43
vechung

Great guitar playing!  Just few spots on your vocals needs tuning.  Just a suggestion: have tried some screaming?   The snare of the drum is a bit flat.  It needs more pop.  You can fix that by using the transient shaper and increasing the attack.
2013/04/10 11:31:35
evadianepug
Hi, Bobby.  Glad to see you.  This is a good rocker.  I sent a PM to you.
2013/04/10 19:33:11
ohgrant
 Something tells me I'm going to regret this, but my honest review. Never was anything wrong with your guitar work and some nice work here. Since the project is lost I'll skip the mix.
 The vocals are the big thing here and probably the most subjective. There is some off key notes but overall there are parts that you seem more confident and in those parts I hear a diamond in the rough.
 I'm not suggesting you do this over but if you were to put the project back together and made a karaoke track and practiced that a few times and be absolutely certain of every note you want to sing. You could nail that and knock it out of the park.
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