I do remember this tune... I love the vibe this gives...
Great work Lynn...

Great tune.  I was trying to figure out why that vocal seemed so familiar to me.  Then I saw the 'Jack  Bruce' comment by James.  Yes, exactly. 

Frank, thanks for your kind words and for remembering this.

Dan, thanks for listening and  responding.  Congratulations on your song, and welcome to the forum.

Nice song Lynn. You voice sounds like Clapton to me in this song.

Bob, thank you for dropping by.  I'm very flattered that my voice has been mentioned with Jack Bruce and Eric Clapton.  But, I missed my mark-I was going for Ginger Baker.

BTW, I remixed today (3/11) boosting the vocals a touch in response to several suggestions.  I hope this is going in the right direction.

Hey Lynn
GREAT piece.  KUDOS on your arrangement. A lot is going on but the instrument separation/EQing is sounding great on my end.  I'm really liking your performance and tone your getting form the electric guitar.  A solid sounding performance/mix.


Kev

Kev, thanks so much and congratulations on your new song.

Lynn, I love the song, good writing, good lyrics. On my speakers, to my faulty ears, the drums sound a bit distant, and I think your lead vocal could come forward a bit too. Well done! Mark

Mark, I agree with you about your comments concerning the drums and vocal, and I thank you for your ears.  I have remixed the song accordingly, and I hope you enjoy.  The new mix is in post #1.

you have done it again. what a kool voice? i am really impressed but one thing is disturbing me the echo on the strings sounds a bit like a can. if i were you i would try to make it a bit wider and warmer (more definition) but other than that there is nothing to complain. All the Best