This is so 80s Blondie ...Debbie Harry meets Julibee ...meets a yamaha dx7


I creamed my jeans

I like it 

I love this song and Jubilee's vocal.  The backing instruments could come up a bit, but it's close, as is.  Don't overthink this, and let your ears be your guide.  My hat's off to all involved.

Thank you Mooch no stains I hope.

Thank you Lynn I am just having a little look at some subtle changes to the mix but I may well just leave it alone.

I like it. Sometimes you can bypass getting a pristine mix in favour of atmosphere, which this has in abundance. Hawkwind, hmm..more like Curved Air 

Thanks James my past is catching up with me.

Me likey!

Love the arrangement/production...  Great rhythm track... nice orchestration... I like the vocal, but it seems a little dry and it could benefit from some pitch correction... well done guys & gals...

Hey, Wook!
 
It's always great to hear a new song post from you, and both you and Jules did a fantastic job together on this cool piece of modern electronica with a distinct 80's vibe!
 
Similar to Mooch's comment, I'm getting a bit of a Blondie and Berlin feel, with maybe even a touch of early Cars thrown in for good measure.
 
Very cool song, nice work!
Bob

Thank you Ed appreciated.

Frank glad you enjoyed, perhaps, but have a listen to the Remix see what you think cheers

Bob something a little different please you listened and thanks for the encouragement.

Thanks to all the others who listened and did not comment.  

There is a remix See link above or first post) up now with the original for comparison.

All comments welcome this is my first attempt with a good singer, Wookiee fur makes for thick skin so all crits and comments welcome.


Thanks again.

Love the remix.. vocals sound much better... still a slight pitchyness in spots, but sounds good anyway...
Very cool production...