Really cool chunks here! I will have to agree with The Band- there were ideas within that I loved, but to me, it doesn't feel like a 'song', more of a compilation.

foxwolfen, Thanks for the comments and I'm glad you enjoy my various works. It is quite time consuming, but if I didn't enjoy doing it, then I wouldn't. But, stay tuned there is more to come.

Peace be with you. Blessings, John

davdub101, Well, after going to listen to your music and checking out 3 tunes, I can see why you may feel and think the way you do. We are in two different worlds of music and sound production. Not that that's a bad thing. Yes, you are exactly right, a music compilation, but for a video, as mentioned above in responses to others. So, basically it is not a song, but music to be used throughout a video, that will require various adjustments, and additions to bring it full circle. Glad you enjoyed for the most part. Thanks for listening.

Peace be with you. Blessings, John

John,
 
Well done, like the music very much.   From a mix perspective there are a few cymbal crashes and cymbal swells that are a bit too loud but otherwise, really nice job.
 
Regards

John, this was a very enjoyable listen for me.  It had an uplifting kind of feeling to it if your groping for video themes... balloons... hang gliding?  Well done.

markno999, Thanks for the listen and the comments. Yes, there are a couple of cymbal crashes and hits and swells that could use a tweak or two, but I will save all the tweaking for when the music is incorporated into a video. There is a good possibility that long sections of this will have volume down control work applied while other part may even go up. You never know until you have the video or even a game to work with. Thanks again and glad you enjoyed the piece.

Peace be with you. Blessings, John

phil, thanks for the listen and glad you enjoyed the mix. It does have some good potential for several video themes and also gaming, so I just have to see what comes up and then take it from there. Thanks for your input. Very much appreciated.

Peace be with you. Blessings, John

This is excellent...  some great sounds, and great editing... very nice... Well done John... 

Frank, Thank you for the nice comments and for listening. Very much appreciated.

Peace be with you. Blessings, John

This does indeed showcase your talent in musicianship, production and versatility to great effect .

Superb work all-round John.