PCODE, Not to bad, very tribal sound to it. Maybe you can add some other instrumentation. It does have a continuous beat that is the same all the way through it and so I suggest you try and change that up a bit so it doesn't sound so repetitious. The volume is good on most of the instrumentation except for a couple them. You might consider panning things out a bit and don't be afraid of going left or right with a piece or two. Very good start on the unfinished piece. Like to hear it when it is finished.
Peace be with you. Blessings, John