Lovely piece, Janet I enjoyed.

Thanks Phil! :)

Yeah, Paulo, that's more unlikely.  lol

And thank you, too, Grant!

Anyone wanna venture a comment to let me know if I've tamed this enough?  Then it can happily slip off into oblivion.  :)  

Very pretty tune as always.  I wish I had a dose of your piano skills.

I think you should go for your own Web site.  You could have it reflect the beauty of your songs, which the free SoundClick doesn't do.  I know I feel better with my own site now, and you certainly deserve it.

Daryl

Thank you Daryl. That's very kind.  I've thought about doing my own webite. It hasn't worked its way up to the top of the to-do list...and I'm probably going in too many directions at once I guess.  

And if it's any comfort, every time I hear a good piano player, I wish I were better too.  :)  
Thanks again!  

Nice work.  I enjoyed it, and thought it flowed well.  I found the bass notes to fit, and maybe I'm in the minority but I'd like to hear them possibly get a little more involved for a bit?  I listened twice!  And it's quite expressive how you built this, then had the last 30 seconds create a falling feather type mood.  Excellent piece.

Hi Janet, sounds good to me, I can even hear the last note now ; ) Nice and deep. Would love to hear more reverb on this , did I ever tell you I like reverb  ? ; )

Rik

Thank you, dacookster!  So more bass now, huh?  Well, maybe I dialed it back too much.  Glad you got the ending.  That's supposed to be the swans landing.  Although, as I said earlier, the whole thing doesn't even sound like swans flying to me now.  lol  Anyway, thanks again!

Thanks Rik.  Glad you can hear the last note.  More reverb?  Hmm...I could try it. Maybe just for you.  :) 

Do you have swans by your home?  So was this really composed by watching swans?  Oh hell, even if not, just lie and tell us yes.