Last time I saw a swan it tried to bite my grandson.  lol

This was just from looking at the picture of the swan 'dancing' that's on my SC page. :)  

Hi Janet – sounds pretty good to me. The bass notes really did stick out in the earlier mix and I did find them distracting – I never said anything because I have no mixing skills.
 
This mix sounds much more balanced.  It’s a real pretty composition. I rarely criticize anything because my stuff is so sloppy that I am hardly the one to crit anything and the internet being what it is, words are often misconstrued. So take this in the gentle way it is intended – I’d love to hear this played in a less precise manner – like after a couple of glasses of wine  – so you could just emote your way into the tune and kind of get lost in it.
 
Okay, enough from me, it's good stuff. 

Thanks Manny.  So, play it half-drunk, huh?  I can't even imagine.  :)  But I get your point.  So, play it half-drunk, huh?  I can't even imagine.  :)  But I get your point.  Thanks! 

"1/7:  35 listens and not one comment?  lol"


People are jerks.. Take it from me? I'm a person? And I'm a jerk!

My opinion, and you know what they say about opinions?

My opinion is that this is "much" better! :-)


And P.S.? I don't hear anything here but you. And there's certainly nothing wrong with that. You make some of my favorite music.

Very nice soothing piece...

I think this is my new favourite piece by you Janet. Not sure about the swan motif, but who cares, its still great!

Well, thanks Robby.  I know you'd tell me if it wasn't better, so thanks for listening again! 

Thank you, Cclarry.

Thanks Shad. You're favorite?  Well, I'm glad I went ahead and finished it then.  Yeah, the swan motif...you're right.  I knew I should have named it something different and kept that name for the RIGHT piece.  lol  Maybe I will.  :) 

lovely Janet. I really could hear this one with a full orchestra backing

The bass comes through fine on my computer speakers.  maybe a tad loud at some places, but I love the clarity.  Wish I could play any instrument so well.

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Thank you, Daryl.  Yeah, I can hear it with a full orchestra too. And before I tried it, I figured that would be pretty easy to do.    (oh, but I'd love to!) :)


Thank you AT.  Still loud in some places?  Well, I'll go back and check.  Sure do appreciate you checking it out! :)