"Robert, you've got a good bed, but you need to start planting some stuff in it" Two words? Genevieve Morton... 


This gave me a Jona Lewy vibe. I thought it was a very good effort for your first stab at something you've never done? (like me being civil! LOL)

Very cool.  

That was a GREAT first attempt into the world of electronica.  Looking forward to hearing the finished piece.


Kev

I agree, not a bad start. I think you have a decent enough theme to work with, but it is buried within the pad. I am not fond of the droning pad sound, but I think it is the right idea. Look forward to the progress.

It is indeed a good start. There are too many elements front and center to get a handle on what you trying to go for.

The kick resonance in the beginning made some sweet love to my sub.

Sounds pretty good to me - I tend to agree with James about all the elements competing with front and center. 

Thanks for all the comments.

I only put the kick and snare there just for the beat. I always write the drums out when I'm finished with everthing else so there will be hats, fills and cymbals.

I finished the lyrics last night and have a change. Hopefully be close to done by next week.

You're like a pro. This is cool.

That wav form could use some dips in it. 

Thanks Mark! I appreciate it!

Scotty, maybe I can get the town to use their plow on it and give it a few potholes? lol! Thanks for checking it out!