Ali, Nice start for a bigger thing. Seems to need a bit more happening in it and is a bit, well repetitious to a degree. I'm sure you know what your looking for and maybe this is it. It isn't my genre, so I can only give my opinion, not that its worth anything. Nice clean sound work though. Play around with a few other instrumentation samples and see what you come up with.
Peace be with you. Blessings, John