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2013/03/17 15:02:10
Wookiee
Sounds better but I still think the kick could do with some bottom weight.  The vox sound dry here too.

Thanks for sharing again
2013/03/18 11:48:36
Lynn
You've received some good advice on the mix, but the song is terrific and deserves the best treatment you can give it.  Your performances are great.  I can't wait to hear the finished version.
2013/03/21 21:06:23
evadianepug
Pedro, I watched the video.  First let me say that you did a great job on this.  I grew up in an age of protest songs and got put off by them for a long time.  This song didn't send me packing.  Your video was relevant and the song came across very well.  I liked all of the instrumentation and the mix is better critiqued by some of the people up here.  I can listen three times in a row and it changes every time.  Could be the hearing aids.  LOL!  I guess I'm saying that I liked your song and performance. 
2013/03/21 23:41:21
foxwolfen
Jeeze I like this song a lot. I still think the mix needs a little work near the vocal range and lead guitar, but I have reached the limit of my knowledge. I would give Danny Danzig or Jamesyoyo a nudge and see if you can get some input from them.
2013/03/22 14:26:30
pittaxavy
Thank you for the kind words about the song, , I´ve followed the advices posted by fellow members and those made the song better, so i thank you all for that!! I´ve been tweaking the mix for some days now and I´m affraid that i reached a point where nothing i do seems to make it better to my ears, maybe i need a break for a few a days ( my wife will appreciate that.... this song is going viral at my place hehehe). 
But please keep the inputs comming and i´ll work some more on the song,

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12219210

Thanks,

Pedro
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