Hi Freddy, good job on this song and production. Good lead vocal and Mark did great on the guitar licks.
The bass sounds good - not like a synth to me. The drums are too compressed and the snare very wide sounding as compared to cracking or popping. If you lighten up the stereo compression on the kit it might help the drums breath a little. The lead vocal seems too up front to me.
I first listen on my speakers this morning at low volume 'cause my family is still sleeping. I like to check my mixes at very low volume to see if I can still hear all the instruments. In your mix, at low volume, I could not easily hear the kick and lead vocal seemed to be really up front. Then, when I put on my ATH M50 cans, the kick was right there and the vocal did not seem as loud. However, I am wondering if you did your final mix using phones instead of speakers. You mix seems to translate better in phones to me anyway. If you remix, try it on speakers at very low volume and then check in cans and speakers cranked up and see if you might like it better.
I love the lyrics and vibe. You guys did a nice job on this.
Rimshot