Excellent job Jerry, I loved it. I listened to the whole thing and thought it sounded great all around.
You get the "I prefer more salt on my potato's" everywhere. For the most part, I think people are trying to be helpful in their own way. With all of your experience, I would think brushing those comments aside, (if you don't agree with them), should be fairly routine. Everyone has an opinion, but who is right, when it comes to music?
I hate to see this thread turn negative, after posting such a cool piece of music, that obviously took alot of work and dedication. I am glad you posted this, not only because it was a joy to listen to, but it was also a motivator for me. Thank you for posting this piece.