Thank you all for responding so fast.  I already remixed and moved every parameter in the directions that were suggested.  It's 6:52 pm CST, so let's see what we get now.

I do things alone in the basement too... But it's best I not discuss them. You're vibe is always Steve Miller to me :-) I like it, but there's something about the fuzzy guitar in my left ear that feels too mid heavy. I like the percussive feel of the guitars.

Hey, Lynn,
 
I remember this cool track from a while ago, and it still sounds really great!
 
I missed the first mix of this new version, but I think I agree with Danny about possibly beefing up the drums even a little bit more in both low end and volume.
 
Robby hit it on the head with the Steve Miller comment, this really has a cool, flowing vibe that reminds me of some stuff on the 'Fly Like An Eagle" album, which I really loved when it came out.
 
Your songs always have cool fusion elements, a strong vintage vibe, and nice modern sounding production work, and to me, that's a great accomplishment, and a mark of excellence.
 
Great song, Lynn!
Bob

Very nice song! Lovely guitar playing and great tone, however it is only coming on the right channel on the entire song. For the solo parts it would be nice if the guitar is in the middle to bring it up. Hopefully that would make it hotter. Nice singing and mix.

nice job on this..... I caught a S Miller vibe on this too. 

Hi Lynn. I'm struggling getting soundclick to work on a tablet. Do you have another link? Or will it be on youtube soon? 
Mark.

Really interesting concept. Very creative artistic effect. The lead guitar sounded a bit midi/digital to me, especially near the beginning. I agree with the comments about the drums needing more life in the bottom. I think the overall bottom end needs a bit more energy and dynamics. That would take some of the edge of the mids, but I might still dial the mids down a hair. Because the mids are bordering on harsh, I did not get a good sense of the highs quality. I am not sure if you are putting this together as a commercial project, or strictly personal/portfolio. If commercial, I am not prepared to say its ready for that yet.

No nits here except maybe the abrubt start. But then, it sort of matches the end:)

Really well put together Lynn. Nice tight production. Excellent song.

Hi Lynn, This sounds very good on my ancient laptop. Excellent job of soloing smoothly through the time signature... Cool song and vibe. Very nice!

Lynn, you've already heard from some of the best ears on the forum so far as the mix goes, and I was just listening on my pc speakers, so... I'm just gonna' say that the mix sounded fine to me.  I'll confine my comments to the song and performance, both of which were truly excellent.  The tune moved nicely from start to end and kept my interest the whole way.  Good feel, nice instrumentation, and I for one really liked the guitar tone.  Vocals were exceptional.  Great job.