Great track Lynn with some very interesting twists and turns in a proggy way.

Loved your guitar playing and the tone of it.

Your vocals, particularly the harmonie parts are great and just perfect for the song.

I'm not as qualified as others here to tell you how to improve the mix, but it's still sounded enjoyable to me as it stands.

 Good one Lynn.

Hey Lynn
Another vote on the Steve Miller vibe.  I know . . . I always say this about your vocals and harmonies but man you killed this.  I really like the guitar tone and your performance was GREAT. The mix is sounding good on my end.  If i had to nit I would add a smidge more verb/space to the drums. A bit dry sounding compared to the rest of the mix.  KUDOS!


Kev

John, thanks a lot for your reply.  I hope you enjoy my music as much as I enjoy yours!

Kev, thank you for taking the time to dig this up and listen.  Being likened to Steve Miller rocks my boat.  It's funny you bring up the reverb on the drums, as I lessened it in response to someone's suggestion.  It's kind of a coin toss right now.

Really great track, Lynn.  Thanks for sharing.

guitardood, thanks for taking the time to listen and comment.  Everyone has been so gracious and helpful with this event.  I'll soon be posting another song for your perusal.

 Hey Lynn, congrats on another really nice tune! I didn't read all of the other comments on this and my input might be either redundant or contradictory. I'll just give you my first impressions.

 Well written and played. On the mix- The drums, specifically the partially choked ride seemed to jump out on my cheap earbuds and it seemed a tad dry. I am sorry I don't have anything better to listen to this on right now. Like any recipe you might add more salt and I might not like salt...so take this with a grain of salt.

Enjoyed the song.

Starise, thank you so much for taking the time to listen.  I should by a set of earbuds to check my mixes on, but it sounds entirely different at the IMAX theater...

Wow!  Hypnotic jazzy enticement with lyrical enchantments galore!
I love your trip!

WhoA!  That guitar is alivE in the middle.


'Can't describe this well with words: Magical, delicious, carpet-ride, vibrant ... wondrous!

Lynn, you always have an interesting and engaging style to your songs, they're different but familiar (if that makes any sense). Anyhow, I like 'em, and this one is excellent. Love the harmonies and the guitar work is inspired.

Philip and James, you both made my day with your kind words.  This forum has helped me in so many ways.  I'll soon be posting another song from my upcoming compilation, and I hope you can help with it, as well.  Thanks again!