the wildman
and lastly by James who gave some specific ideas via PM.
Did I..? Must have been some other body.
This sounds tons better..vocals sound great now. Drums are clearer but there's not much difference between the kick and the snare, they're both very clicky.
The bass is pretty low now, that could come up.
If you have more than one guitar track I would pan them left and right outside the vocal, or balance the guitar and piano that way, leave some room in the centre for the bass.
Is the organ playing right through the song? I only heard it at the end.
Huge improvement though.