Hello everyone this is my New collaboration Hip hop track. I made the instrumental and mix. the person rapping/ singing is a fellow friend of mind. https://soundcloud.com/to...g-stutter-dont-kill-my

Jay Z would be proud. I could not turn it up too much here, so I cannot say for sure, but judging from the lower volume, I am worried there is not enough punch to drive this when the volume goes up. I will listen again tomorrow and give you a better idea of how it sounds here.

did u got to listen to it again?

opinions about what in particular ?

You might want to include a language warning. Not offending to me though. Very nice sounding production. Pumping my sub here. Great choice of vocalist for this. Top notch HH to my ears congrats.

Sounds good to me, possibly almost radio-ready, good stuff. The only thing I would change is perhaps the snare sound, perhaps something punchier and louder in the mix, but that's just me. Not too familiar with the production techniques of the genre to be honest. 

I am sorry, I keep forgetting your name. I know you told me but... anyway... as I suspected this needs a bit more energy in the bottom. Its not making my shoelaces bounce. I think it would benefit from a really deep long drawn out "Bum BOOOOOoooooommmm" every now and then. Use it as punctuation. Make it deep. Love the song.

Oh, and I do agree, a language warning would be appropriate.

thanks it not a finish product yet i still need to make changes

add a tuned 808 kick drum to provide some groove on the low end

it needs to be mastered, and the vocal is great but needs a subtle eq job. It could use a tad of distortion on the verses.

Best thing I have heard from you yet, DRMA.