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Loved the atmospheric piano in this. I'm always a sucker for that.
I think you've come a long way with your melodic writing James. Some of your earlier melodic lines did'nt sound too developed, but they do in this one.
I would prefer to hear more quantizing on the synths, but that's just a preference of mine, others may disagree on that.
There are some good change-ups in this and they all flow together well.
Personally, i'm dead against un-quantized percussion in electronic tracks as they just don't sound right to me, but that's just a personal thing i have about that.
I'd love to hear this with a programmed electronic percussion track as i think it would really lift this to another level.
Great to see you're still developing your technique and it seem to be coming along nicely.
Thanks John for take on this song , yea its taken many years to get this far
in my music thanks to you and a few others on the forum .
I'm really glad I stuck with it and put in the time and effort to try to improve
but there plenty more room for more improvement and I'm working on setting
goals in that area for the next five years but learning guitar so I will finally
be able to add some of my own real guitar to my music . That and my own drums
, getting back into playing drums again will take some time again because I
haven't played for so long but hey I will get there again and as long as I can
stay healthy I plan on making some big improvements . Can't do it over night
all I can do is try my best to reach my goals and see where I end up in the next
five years .
As the old saying goes " get crackin and work your butt off , payday is just
around the corner " ! LOL