I like it - something going on with the timing of this tune - doesn't sound like the drums are lined up properly. Other than that - very cool.

I like the tune, good keyboard and bass parts, but as you must already know the timing of the drums is all over the place.
If you are triggering from an electronic drum, why don't you record midi and then Quantise it in sonar?
Just an idea.

CLEAN


I like it - something going on with the timing of this tune - doesn't sound like the drums are lined up properly. Other than that - very cool.

          Thanks Mark , maybe your right and it could be another issue , you see before I
           played and added my own drum track I already had this loop percusion track in
           the mix . Maybe thats what your hearing and that could be making everything
           sound off beat or out of time .
 
           What I can do is delete that percusion track and see if that fixes the issue , if
           not then I will play my drums to my music without that percusion track .
 
 
           By the way I'm almost done adding drums to your song , I think you'll like it
           when you listen to it .
           I will try to finish it tommorrow and then work on this song again , thanks for
           being nice about it .
 
          James

the wildman


I like the tune, good keyboard and bass parts, but as you must already know the timing of the drums is all over the place.
If you are triggering from an electronic drum, why don't you record midi and then Quantise it in sonar?
Just an idea.

          Thanks for the comments , I'll see if I can't fix the problem that might not even
          have anything to do with the way I played . It could be that Loop Percusion track
          making it sound out of time .
 
          Thanks -James

So two guys in a row said exactly the same thing I originally said, so is there any particular reason you didn't go all apesh!t on them?

Or do you just have it in for me? I am calling Mom!

TNF is for me, like PP is for Frank. A source of endless mirth and amusement. He is so easy to set off. However, James, you may want to go easy on THE NIGHT FOX!!!(tm)(C)(R). He may have another heart attack or some other odd personal body function malfunction. From the sounds of it, he is on his last legs and might drop any moment now, and we would not want to be responsible for his head exploding prematurely or something. I for one do not want to clean up THAT mess. Well.. actually.. thinking about it... if his head exploded... there would not actually BE much mess would there?

jamesyoyo


So two guys in a row said exactly the same thing I originally said, so is there any particular reason you didn't go all apesh!t on them?

Or do you just have it in for me? I am calling Mom!
 
 
Dang did I hurt your feelings , I'M SORRY !

foxwolfen


TNF is for me, like PP is for Frank. A source of endless mirth and amusement. He is so easy to set off. However, James, you may want to go easy on THE NIGHT FOX!!!(tm)(C)(R). He may have another heart attack or some other odd personal body function malfunction. From the sounds of it, he is on his last legs and might drop any moment now, and we would not want to be responsible for his head exploding prematurely or something. I for one do not want to clean up THAT mess. Well.. actually.. thinking about it... if his head exploded... there would not actually BE much mess would there?
 
As long as my you know what doesn't drop off I'l keep it up ! LOL
NEVER BACK DOWN my daddy told me !

Anyway James, the constructive feedback you got has hopefully pointed you in the right direction. With MIDI, there is very little reason for there to be timing errors. You should accept that without resorting to such extreme negativity all the time. I know you can't, it is not in your nature, but it would be nice if you perhaps ... tried. I am not being sarcastic right now James. I believe you have a decent enough ability with music, and with a little more effort, you would achieve the results and commendation you desire.

foxwolfen


Anyway James, the constructive feedback you got has hopefully pointed you in the right direction. With MIDI, there is very little reason for there to be timing errors. You should accept that without resorting to such extreme negativity all the time. I know you can't, it is not in your nature, but it would be nice if you perhaps ... tried. I am not being sarcastic right now James. I believe you have a decent enough ability with music, and with a little more effort, you would achieve the results and commendation you desire.

          Well I thank you for your feedback , to be honest with you this going back in forth
          is a waste of time when all of us me included could be working on music in some
          created way instead of trashing each other for personal gain or for whatever 
          reason .
          I'm not perfect at creating music but over the past six years I have to say I have
          greatly improved from where I first started out using Music Creator 3 .
          I made a mistake over 13 years ago when I stop playing back in the 90's , back
          I was much younger , I played ten times better so for me restarting again will
          take some time and I expected that .
         
          I think the next time maybe tommorrow evening when I repost it those issues
          will be fixed after I replay it once more and without that Percusion loop track
          added to the song when it was first created .
      
          See what happens tommorrow - James
         
          Anyway