Please select  I Won't Wait Here For You
 
lemme know what you think about the song, production, performances,
Thanks, Lawrence
 
http://www.reverbnation.com/lawrenceellington

pssssttt... the song title is "I wont wait *here* for you". - If I were aloud to swear I would say "somethin A". Great song. Absolutely superb. I would buy this (I wont, as I steal music, but I would if I were honest ). (That was joke for all you uptight PC types). Stellar work.

wow nice and powerful.
almost has a jerry cantrell sound to it in the begining.
i love jerry.one of my favos.

really feel the power when the chorus kicks in too.
its all about powerfull words put in the right places on top of the right hooks.
you have managed that greatly in this song.
-on a different note)
dude lawrence,that lead in Bleed(never again)smoking bro !
im a fan now.

Thank You Bro,  very nice of you to say. very much appreciated,
On Bleed I just wanted to try & rip out a searing & Bluesy ala michael schenker lead vibe.
Thank you again for your kind words,
 

That is knocked out... Outstanding Vocal Performances...
wow ... what a great production... Tops...

lellington954@


Please select  I Won't Wait Here For You
 
lemme know what you think about the song, production, performances,
Thanks, Lawrence
 
http://www.reverbnation.com/lawrenceellington

Very nice tune.  Wonderful vocals and guitar work.


Just a couple of critiques:
        Crash cymbals are a quite a bit too loud and too bright especially in comparison to the rest of the drums.  Maybe just pulling the volume down about 3db might do it.


        Drums, especially the snare, could be a little brighter.


        Those wonderful vocals, especially during the verses, have a little too much sibilance and could use a de-esser.


Otherwise, great mix.


Best,

This is a terrific song and performance.  I thought the mix was just about right because it popped out of my speakers, and I didn't have to strain to hear anything.  You have a very good voice, and it should be your lead instrument.  Well done.

Hey, Thank You Bro, Listened to 3 so far on your soundcloud, enjoyed them very much, very nice, Thank you again, much appreciated.

Yep, oops, LOL, It was late, Thanks,

Very nice Lawrence. This has so much potential! The mix sounds nicely balanced, and the vocals sound great, but I would like to hear them a bit more 'Up front'. My initial impression was that the acoustic guitar sounded really nice, but when the vocals came in, it sounded very unbalanced. Let those vocals shine. It could be just a personal preferance of mine, but that was my take. Nice job, and good luck with the tune!