Good stuff, like the arrangement of this song a lot, loads of dynamics. I hear a lot of influences in here, even got a hint of 'The Damned'style punk here and there.

The lead guitar is the only let-down, it is definitely sounding out of tune.

Vocals, rhythm guitars and drums are superb.

Great tune.

Fix the tuning on the geetar pleeeeeze.

jamesyoyo


I love what you got out of Add Drums on this track. 

I would add a lot of compression to the vocals on the chorus. And to the bass.

That lead is kinda lifeless @2:51...maybe add some echo to it to ****e it up.

Enjoyed the tune.

Yep...unfortuantely....I can't be a solid whole band by myself and the lead guitar is one of my weaker parts. That is what I could work out though. Thanks for listening and for the comments. The chorus vocals are pretty compressed with the JJP Vox plug...I could still experiment though. ;)

jamesg1213


Good stuff, like the arrangement of this song a lot, loads of dynamics. I hear a lot of influences in here, even got a hint of 'The Damned'style punk here and there.

The lead guitar is the only let-down, it is definitely sounding out of tune.

Vocals, rhythm guitars and drums are superb.

Okay...I will look at those leads. Is it the leads all the way though? I am not sure how I am missing this.
 
A hint of the Damned eh? That is a cool thing to hear....I had another guy say he heard some punk influence....surely unintended but I like to know that the vibe is there.

Hey...I will send anyone a solo-less version of the song if they want to track a better lead. My abilities are for sure limited.   :)

Okay...I made some updates to the song.
 

• Added a little more echo to lead
• Removed extrenuous kicks from the chorus
• Tweaked lead a few cents up
• Created a SoundClick VIP page to host the 320kbps version.

 
Let me know if the guitar tweaking helped at all.
 
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12194945