That's a very faithful cover, good job. I wouldn't be shy about bringing the vocals up in the mix, they sound fine.
The first minute of this song reminded me more of Hendrix than Gilmour
Sounded just like the original to me, very nicely captured.
Having covered the 'Money' solo myself, I can testify that while Gilmour's solos may sound simple, it's all in the feel, the phrasing and the accurate bends. All really well executed here.