sorry but, 15 year olds don't know the word bonafide, let alone sing it......
Other than that, I love your stuff. Needs a lot of work but, what doesn't.
The main comment I have about this 'Six sense' song which probably applies to your other vocal stuff is that I think you should refrain from all the hollow sounding effects. ie: chorus, doubling, room verb etc.
Also, A high pass filter on most everything will help a lot.
Nice sketches.