All critiques appreciated.
 
https://soundcloud.com/Mosvalve
 
 

Just minor nit. Verb/space on drums seems just a tad "too big" to me. Kind of like the drums are in a different space. Maybe just too much on the snare? Can't put my finger on it exactly.

Everything else sounds pretty good to me on first listen.

I like this song and your voice very much.  From what I hear on the radio and TV nowdays, I think reverb is making a comeback.  Of course, like s.p.i.c.e. it requires a deft hand, but I think you got it about right.  If you like it, I can like it, too.

Great keyboard feel and good guitar riffs. 
The drums seem disconnected. Perhaps they have more reverb than the rest of the mix? 
You might try finding some "space" a few times. (EG cut drums/bass or other occasionally, like you do at the ending)

Thanks for your insight on the mix. I can hear it now the drums disconnect. Yeah probably should cut down on the verb some. I really appreciated guys. thanks.

I stopped listening the second I heard "God's special way". Religion and Fascisim are two sides of the same ignorant coin for me. Please, at least give a content warning so I can choose whether or not I want to listen to it.

i really like this tune,i listen to two of your songs,this one and "my baby left me blues".
i find for myself anyway it helps me connect with the artist.
i really like the way you opened up snare with a large hall reverb during the second verse i think it was.
the guitar i think could be a little more powerful comming in but when your doing a mix like this it is easier said than done.

Chad i think your over reacting a wee bit.but your intitled to your own opinion and I would be foolish to argue with you about it.
this isnt a religious song,artist such as led zeppelin with "in my time of dying"..and the almond brothers "lord i was born a travelin man"
had such references,i never found these to be songs of religion,nor would I turn off instantly just because of a quick reference.

so just so the next person knows,i didnt find this to be the case.

foxwolfen


I stopped listening the second I heard "God's special way". Religion and Fascisim are two sides of the same ignorant coin for me. Please, at least give a content warning so I can choose whether or not I want to listen to it.

 
First off this is not a religious song. It's a song my oldest son inspired when he was 4 years old and me and his mom were going through a divorce. I am glad you stopped listening because your ignorant. I'm offended by your ignorance and
intolerance to others. Maybe you should have warnings about your songs for others who live in a politically correct world.
Give me a break.

Mosvalve

foxwolfen


I stopped listening the second I heard "God's special way". Religion and Fascisim are two sides of the same ignorant coin for me. Please, at least give a content warning so I can choose whether or not I want to listen to it.

 
First off this is not a religious song. It's a song my oldest son inspired when he was 4 years old and me and his mom were going through a divorce. I am glad you stopped listening because your ignorant. I'm offended by your ignorance and
intolerance to others. Maybe you should have warnings about your songs for others who live in a politically correct world.
Give me a break.

blow it off.
this is only one opinion.
and we all know what opinions are like..dont we?

chuckebaby

Mosvalve

foxwolfen


I stopped listening the second I heard "God's special way". Religion and Fascisim are two sides of the same ignorant coin for me. Please, at least give a content warning so I can choose whether or not I want to listen to it.

 
First off this is not a religious song. It's a song my oldest son inspired when he was 4 years old and me and his mom were going through a divorce. I am glad you stopped listening because your ignorant. I'm offended by your ignorance and
intolerance to others. Maybe you should have warnings about your songs for others who live in a politically correct world.
Give me a break.

blow it off.
this is only one opinion.
and we all know what opinions are like..dont we?

You know what cracks me up? he has a song called (GOD Made Me Do It.) I couldn't understand the words but it sounded like he's pissed off at god for some reason. People need to get a grip you know, life is short. These people who complain thet everyone else is intolerant are the very people who are not tolerant.
 
Consider it blown off now.  Thanks Chuck.