New mix. Have a listen!

i have to agree with i think it was bapu,the bass drum is either clipping or an effecting causing digital distortion which in turn is creating a audible crackling sound on the 3rd beat of every single measure.

i think the vocal are okay,they seem to fit the song.
it is a little long but the ideas you have here are very creative.
and nice.

i think this new mix you put up,(the one that i heard anyway)
isnt to bad except for that digital clipping.
sometimes we fatigue ourself with our mixes,i do it all the time.
Example in my situations:My bass track that sounded perfect in a track gets to sounding to low after listening as the mix goes on through long periods of time,this is when a break is neccessary.
this happens to me all the time.
that clipping sound you may have got used to and start hearing it as part of the mix,rather than a problem.
check your signal path on the kick,its either a track ,bus or effect overload.

i do like the song,its very original to my ears and i strive for originality.
you have my praise for that.

nice effort,

Thank you for the feedback,

I'm not entirely sure that this clipping you are hearing. It might just be distortion combined with flam. It might be clipping though. That being said, I kind of like it. Clipping has become somewhat accepted as a creative device. Although it might limit it's commercial appeal.

I'll look into a way to solve it. I'm thinking there might be too many bass kicks on top of each other because of the flam. It might be overloading the VST even though the level looks fine. If anyone has any ideas on this, it would be appreciated.

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I do like the beats and the overall groove.

It is just so damn monotonous I couldn't finish it.

Do a hpf on your vocal starting around 450hz with a fairly aggressive slope.  You need to get some of the low body out of your vocal. That way it would be a bit more ethereal within the context of the song.

The organ sound is a bit too loud.

+1 mix sounds good----I hear distortion in the kick but I think its just part of the sample

Thank you for the feedback everyone.

Hopefully the mastering will break the monotony a little. If anyone has any sections they think are boring, let me know the time in the track. I still have time to make changes. I want to make this as high quality as possible.