Very nicely done! Nice and emotive singing. When the bass and drums came in, they do not seem to fit the overall song. This is a meditative song the drum/bass are quite dry. I would put some reverb on them to give them some space. I do relate to the lyrics quite a bit.

Nicely done Rich. Really enjoyed it. Very touching.
I heard the link in your first post. There wasn't a link on post 19.

vechung


Very nicely done! Nice and emotive singing. When the bass and drums came in, they do not seem to fit the overall song. This is a meditative song the drum/bass are quite dry. I would put some reverb on them to give them some space. I do relate to the lyrics quite a bit.

Vicente, thanks for listening and for your comments.  The responses to the ending have been received with varied opinions.  Your comment is noted.
 
The kit is dry and you are probably right, they could us a touch of room verb.  I'll revist this when I get a chance later this evening. 
 
When I went back to listen the song level seem very low.  I don't think theis is correct.  Maybe it's my work computer.  I'll take a second look at this too.
 
Thanks!

timidi


Nicely done Rich. Really enjoyed it. Very touching.
I heard the link in your first post. There wasn't a link on post 19.

Tim,
Thanks for your comments.
 
Post #19?  Yeah!  It made so much sense when I referenced that post.  I edited the OP for clarity. 

GREAT performance/mix.  What really stands out is your vocal performance.  Its a great delivery when you can hear the emotion/control in the artist voice and you delivered.  KUDOS!


Kev

Psalmist35


The kit is dry and you are probably right, they could us a touch of room verb.  I'll revist this when I get a chance later this evening. 
 
When I went back to listen the song level seem very low.  I don't think theis is correct.  Maybe it's my work computer.  I'll take a second look at this too.
 
Thanks!

I noticed that too Rich... I sent you an email...

Wow, Rich, that is a beautiful ballad you've done there.  What a standout vocal performance.  Very moving.

philz


Wow, Rich, that is a beautiful ballad you've done there.  What a standout vocal performance.  Very moving.

Phil, thanks!  I was floored the first time I personally heard this song. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the validation that I did the song justice!

CLEAN


Gorgeous - Rich - this is really so nice - you just seen to be at a different level than most - I just loved this.

<VENT!>  I hate this forum software  <END VENT>
 
Mark, sorry I did not respond earlier.  Things here at wok just recently got crazy and I've missed responding to a few people.  Thanks for listening and the comments.  This song is a perfect example of how simple song can stand on its own.
 
 

drumstixkev


GREAT performance/mix.  What really stands out is your vocal performance.  Its a great delivery when you can hear the emotion/control in the artist voice and you delivered.  KUDOS!


Kev

Kev,
Thanks for the kind words.  I have no one to thank but Melodyne   !!