Sorry for the repost. I tried to update my original post and got a server error so trying a new one Hello Gang, Almost done this one...and need a fresh perspective. Would appreciate any ears you can lend and resulting feedback. Sonics, arrangement...anything you think would be greatly appreciated https://soundcloud.com/tonehook/take-a-bite-1 Thanks very much

Sell it.

Sound's good. I realy like the interplay between the guitar and organ... and the guitar tone is superb. Not overplayed, in the pocket... good.

foxwolfen


Sell it.

Lol.  Thanks for the kind and inspiring response to my earlier post.


The business of music...makes me nauseous....for now, I'm focusing on the content and satisfying a creative desire.  But certainly appreciate the insight and advice.

jbow


Sound's good. I realy like the interplay between the guitar and organ... and the guitar tone is superb. Not overplayed, in the pocket... good.

Thank you.  The guitar is my first love.

Not a big rap fan, but I love the production and performances...
I like the guitar a lot, but I think I would play more muted-staccato during the rap segments... just a suggestion...
Very nice work...
BTW... I appreciate, and agree your comments on my latest tune... in fact I may scratch the drum track and start over on that...

I don't like many rap songs, but this one stands above the pack.  The mix and arrangement are top notch.  The entire frequency spectrum is well represented.  Very impressive.

No crits here.

Great stuff thalweg.

I'm not big on rap, although i love the early public enemy stuff, but i thought this was very good indeed. 

Very pro-sounding and very creative.

Excellent work all-round.