The Story. 

We made each other Valentines gifts this year 

When Liz woke up she had a home made card on the door to get into the garage and then on her steering wheel, and hr windshield wiper. All made with markers and creativity. When she got home from work I player her this song. 

I started writing/recording this at 3:00Pm Chicago Time and had it ready for her when she came home at 4:30

it has am Intro - Verse And  Chourus 

Here's what it needs .. it needs a better mix ... better lyrics that are not scatted with a hand held 58... it needs a bridge ... and probably a much better singer than me ... 

none the less she was very happy and Ill probably get laid tonight and thats the important thing 


I'll finish the song and put it on my CD over the summer - its a work in progress and didn't even exist at all 3 hours ago ... I played everything including drums .. no loops here 

https://soundcloud.com/mo...r-happy-valentines-day

Love it Mooch.
(the part about getting laid)

bapu


Love it Mooch.
(the part about getting laid)

This is the best musical critique you ever gave anyone 

I like it, Mooch.  Good job.  

I like the song form and the strong guitar part opening. I also like the bass line a bunch. Drums sounded grungy and fit in the mix nicely.

I would have asked bapu to sing it.


:-]

all the best,
mike

mike_mccue

I would have asked bapu to sing it. 

You may have just lost a friend in Mooch.


Ok, seriously Mooch. I did like the overall vibe and feel of this WIP. I'll be excited to hear how it turns out.

Howdy Mooch.

Ya know, there's something about this I like. Maybe it's unconventionality? :) It's good.

Bub


Howdy Mooch.

Ya know, there's something about this I like. Maybe it's unconventionality? :) It's good.

Thanks Bub! :) 

Nice tune, Mooch.  Love the bass and guitar feel.  I think you brought the vocal home too.  Good job.