Dark atmo once again just a loop
not even know what genre and should i add more instrumets???

http://soundcloud.com/boomin36beatz/dark-atmo

Thanx

For an all-electronic production the overall sound is very small.  I don't think you need more parts.  The mix needs reworking. The bottom end is hollow and the clap needs more impact. 


I threw an EQ on it and here's what I came up with: http://tinyurl.com/bjzps42

thanx jsaras for listening and mixing this lill piece.  
i know the overall sound needs more shine.
so Re-working is a must but the whole concept makes me made
i was not sure if should power up the bass like you did
at this point of the work.
because that way the whole thing would be get manifested 
and i was thinking off changing the whole feel of it 
making it abit more Complex by adding some backdrop voxsamples and FX
or like you did give it a final Charm by Re-working the sounds.

Once again thanx

and by the way sorry for my misarable English
Maybe sometimes i might be sounding weird
so be cool  when it happens.


Peace!!!

B36B, stick to your vision for a while.  You can do what Jonas did, yourself, but after listening to several other of your tunes, I think you just need to work it.  It has promise.

Thanx Lynn.
of course i can do what Jonas did easily and much much more :-)
but i try to avoid TINITUS so I changed the way of my mixing.
Loudness comes at the end of my projects
Plus i always leave space for some vox or elements if i am not 100 procent sure about something.

when it comes to much much more...
i am talking about how much i love
the mix bus channels of Sonar and the routing possibilities.
each instruments is replacable and each frequency of an object is changable.
once you have told me that sounds are similar to flowers :-)
that's so true.
Once again thanx for leaving this very kind Feedback.
You are always right
i gotta work much more harder.

oooh before i forgott i wouldnt pay a penny for mixing.

Peace!!!

Well, that was different. I really dig it. It started off as standard r&b/dub then moved into a cool beatnik jazz like piece. Mix needs work, but it seems you know what you want to do, so I will await the final version before commenting more on it.