Duke: Thank you kindly for those nice comments! They are surely warming this cold winter's day. My SoundClick is terribly out of date. I stopped uploading years ago since the stream had such a bad resolution (128 kb/s?). It sounds a lot better nowadays and I should think of renewing my library there.  
Cactus:  You were terribly right about timing and RMS. I have now tightened it and really boasted the loudness in a new version. I made some  cleansing of he kick drum track as well. Thanks for enlightening me!

Very cool KS... Love the Guitar & Bass sounds... cool Lyrics and Vocal Performance too...

The vocal has a bit of Ian Anderson sound.  Wow, a lot of arrangment too.

Cool stuff.

Daryl

I hear Nirvana in this at least the first version nevertheless its very nice Eq

Notnat: Thank you so much.  Glad you liked the guitar sound since I know your are an expert. 
Daryl: Jethro Tull was one of my early heroes. Thanks for making the connection. I do appreciate. 
Eko: Nirvana, sounds good to me. I hesitated  bit to mix pop and dissonant punk parts. It seems to work ok.  Thanks a lot eko! 

Creative, good energy and interesting. Love the way the timing of the rhythm track seems to strain just behind the vocal (on the “Why don’t you love me” line). Very original – doesn’t remind me of any specific band – just good solid rock. A bit of humor in there, a bit of angst and all very clever (not a joke novelty type thing – but a solid rocker). Great job.

Manny: Your comments made my day. Thank you so much!

Uploaded a new version with good friends and musicians: ynot (vocals) and Wernborg (lead guitar).