Aside from the percussion, this song fits the video quite well.  It has tension that would go well with many action scenes.

Man, you're good.  I love this!  :)  

Great arrangement and dynamics but I'm not wild about the synth sounds.  What your using?

This is nice piece, soaring and powerful.

Daryl

hey i think in terms of actual material, this might be your best yet, instantly memorable riff which could work in a number of different instrumentations (would be a great folk metal track!) you need to keep this up and set to video, would be awesome

Guys, really sorry for how long it is taking me to reply to your comments, been really busy with work. 

Robby: thanks for sticking with it.

James: I absolutely agree with you regarding the drums so thanks for confirming it, I will work on that.

Doosie: thank you very much too.

Beagle: thanks for popping in for a listen. The drums does seem the main thing letting this track down.

Shad: thanks for your feedback. And I think you have got hang of photography just fine. I would be honoured to work on one of your videos.

Thank you Eko.

Lynn: thank you very much, I really appreciate it.

Janet: thank you also, glad you liked it.

Daryl: much appreciated, the synth was just there as a filler really due to me running out of ideas. It's something from omnisphere.

Mark: thanks for listening to this too, and your nice comments.

mstodge

All,

Sorry to hog the board with two tracks, but i would really like some input into this track please.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EPZKOmaH3K4

Thanks 

Mark.

Nice. Action Strings?
Love the "pad" under the strings.


It's all good to me.

Oohhh nice job Mark!  This is really awesome and interesting!  Although, I was hoping to hear some timpani in here!

lots-o staccat-o...
very cool arrangement ...
well done Mark...

Pretty cool track. Could do with some epic orchestral percussion doing some booms and bangs (not necessarily without the drum kit though) but other than that I really enjoyed it.

Mark - this isn't my kind of thing - but I can appreciate any tune within a given genre if it is good - and this is really well done. I listened to the whole thing - enjoyed it all.