I wrote this over the past couple of weeks.  One of those ideas that intrudes on you and you have to deal with it before you can continue with whatever it was you were working on  before you got distracted. 
 
But at any rate, I finished it off and I can move on, I think. unless you have some suggestions.
 
This is song about a road...... that can be an analogy...... for whatever hard road you've ridden. 
 
We Might Not Make It  http://www.darylcrowley.com/free_songs
 
 
Daryl

Your site lets someone play multiple songs at once. I expected this one to be in the list on the left, but it wasn't. Just some ideas on how to improve it. (the site) I clicked on the list on the left, and then realized that wasn't the song? And clicked on the song, and both were playing at once.

I wouldn't call this a vocal tune, I would call it "classic you." I've heard many, they're all good? And this is classic you. I like the way the lead plays off of the vocal. 

That dotted 16th (or 32nd) on the hats didn't work for me, but it's a producers choice, I may use it more sparingly? Like a ****e 

(this stupid website "cake" won't let me say spise (substitute the S for a C) because it thinks I'm making a racial slur... So f'ing stupid, they should really fix that) 
 
, some can make a memory, too much can make a bad memory :-)  

Good song Daryl. And good performance, recording and engineering.


Nice, I tried to tell the pinheads that their site was broken by reporting the thread, always room for improvement I guess? in this case, "lots of room..."

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The sampler widget follows every screen but the player shoudn't play unless you click on it, but yes it can play at the same time.

Thanks, I do like the hats but no doubt can't hear them as well as you do. 

Thanks Robbie.

Have you ever hear the ****e girls? I love their stuff. ****e girls? It doesn't really sound like your stuff, but the ****e girls are great. I love Posh ****e? She's nice? Married to David Beckem. Those ****e girls, gotta love um. I'm thinking of covering a ****e Girls tune?

And after all? Variety is the ****e of life?

My favorite ****es are pepper and garlic. 

I wish I could tell you how to ****e this up? But it's already pretty ****y.

Nice.

Very cool Daryl (great name by the way) - guitar playing is the biz.
My only nit is (for my taste) I would like the drums to come up a tad but great song

Cool tune Daryl... I agree with Robby, the hi-hat echo on the choruses is messing with the groove... piano should come up and guitar fills maybe down a bit... too much vocal harmony right off the bat, on the first verse... that's just my preference...
I received your new album last week and I really like it...
great work Daryl...

Thanks for input guys!

I wondered about the hi hat, but it's hard for me to hear it, I liked the groove I heard but I wondered about how it came out to normal ears.  I will tweak that.

Good point on the harmony Frank... I just love doing it and find it hard to resist, but no doubt sound advice.  My daughter often consuls me on the same thing.

All good points, and again I appreciate the feed back.  In addition to the folks on this site being my musical heroes, you're also my ears (as mine have abandoned me.)  Thanks much!

Daryl

This sounds very you, all crits noted above, thanks for sharing

I listened to this yesterday but didn't have time to reply.  This is so you, with your distinctive style and guitar playing.  I wish I were that consistent.  Don't slow down.