Just add a touch of reverb /ambience to the violins and you're all set. That low end really rocked my sub!

Strong but short.  Definitely feeling the epic soundtrack kind of vibe.  Well done, Mark.

Only listening on crappy laptop, so can't say anything worthwhile re mix other that it translates pretty well all things considered, so I would probably just do what the yoyomeister says. Impressive orchestral sounds (eastwest?) and I would say probably about he right length as is unless you went for a biggish change. Can easily imagine this being used in a film scene.

ditto.... what they said ^^^^^  

enjoyed it. Well done.

Evil is definitely afraid. ... afraid that this song monotonously drones on and on. Nice tones though.

Yes work on with this it is a really dramatic setup Garita or EWQL I suppose. Somewhere it must be a more ambiance feeling to it I hope.

This is great stuff, would work perfectly for a battle sequence with slow motion cavalry...excellent.

Thank you all very much for your comments and advice.

The main library's i used were LASS and Albion 3.
Due to some of the comments, I've changed it slightly.

http://www.youtube.com/user/MarkStothardMusic?feature=mhee

Thanks
Mark.

Really nice Mark - I cheated and listened to Medieval Roar while I was there.
Have you had any joy selling your stuff to the video game industry? This stuff is perfect for it

excellent Mark. very much set the scene for some epic battle. i thought the whole thing was a bit reverb lite, don't be afraid to splash it on, think 7.1 surround!