Drama Loop don't know what to do?
i am not sure if i should keep spending time for this lill loop.
any suggestions???
i know it is just a lill loop and much early for asking such things
but like i said it is about time.
and of course constructive critics are welcome too :-)

Here it is:

https://soundcloud.com/boomin36beatz/dramaloop1


Thanx

I can hear a fretless bass with notes sliding into each other played to this loop.  I think it would add depth to this piece.

Thanks Lynn for your constructive help
i can imagine that fretless thing too.
so i'll try to add a fretless bass. 
and inside of D-Pro there are lot of fretless stuff. :-)

Once again THANK YOU Lynn

Hmmmmmm velly intellesting. You have a nice hook at time, but it seems to me to waver between a lead part and a harmony part. If you add another synth instrument layer to the lead with a bit of harmonic counterpoint it might add more to it musically. The bass idea should work too, but I would wait to see what the other instruments and percussion you intend to use before deciding on one, as they can change everything.