ORIGINAL: mildew
here is a song i recently produced - all instruments played by me, song written and sung by db grant.
http://rapidshare.de/files/34431131/4follower.mp3.html
Normally I would stick to constructive critisism.
Normally I wouldn't enter the frey of a troll's dream like this one.
Normally I wouldn't bash another's efforts.
But you've asked for it door knob.
And I feel like having a little fun tonight.
Yeah, I listened. (normally I would take the time to make the positive comments this song might deserve... but not tonight)
And yeah... I can tell you played to a click. Really it sounds like to worshipped the click. Even though the overall feel of the song is hurt badly by the fact that you are FOLLOWING the click. Playing behind, not on purpose though, at least I hope not as it's making the song plod.
Under normal circumstances, I would agree with you about overplaying being a bad thing... but man, you should have just used good drum samples for this track. This is pretty much a drum machine loop with the occasional slightly late note. There is the occasioan small fill which you rush each time...
... wait... seems to me that you rush it exacltly the same way each time too... with the same spash, and sloshy hat pattern after... hrmmm...
You need to get a new head on that snare and tune it. Also set up your overheads or effects to avoid the hollow sound. (oops... I was getting constructive there for a second).
Also, on the roto-toms... take the towels off them, brighten them up with a nice outboard high shelf on the way in, gate them so they are able to be audible without ruining your mix and compress them so they sound like you are hitting them with a stick instead of a marimba mallet. You might be able to make them sound like toms then.
You need to have your guitar intonation checked... or buy a tuner, or get your ears checked.
You either used a pickup on the acoustic, or effected it to sound like you did. Why? Why?
If you are not going to ever take the chorus off the vocal in the song, then at least use some of the stereo field for it so it doesn't sound like that. Same thing with the delay.
Ease up on the click... too much too much.
It is hard for me not to say good things about the song, as I think it deserved some. So I will say that.
Oh and yes. I play drums. And to a click, and you can hear me on the first three songs on this page and the one called Washing Machine... oh, and I am playing keys on much of these too:
http://noisevault.com/studio/samples.html ORIGINAL: mildew
Accents, ghost notes, application of rudiments etc are the LAST thing a producer wants to hear from a recording drummer. Good tone, simple playing, metronomic and funky at the same time - thats "hit record" drumming.
Accents, ghost notes, application of rudiments = "stop showing off, play for the SONG" - silly drummers..
Tell that to this guy:
http://noisevault.com/studio/dan.html I can pretty much guarantee if you've turned on the radio, you've heard him. So he might know something about making hit records.