Thanks Lynn and John.  I've had a listen on my Iphone and yes it was a little hot but I should have known that, it was reading a little hot on the KMeter.  I will go back and take it down tad later today.

Thanks for all the help guys.

Peace Ben

I kinda like this... interesting overall vibe... the best vocal performance i've heard from you... Very Cool Ben...

http://soundcloud.com/aaudiomystiks/flowers-variations the other link takes you to the updated version too
Thanks Frank, yea even after all the years of abuse of my vocal chords, my vocals are actually gettign better and stronger.

I've updated the mix and turned it down about one and a half DB, Shad if you read this let me know if that is sounding any better.  And if ir's not if you have any suggestions let me know cheers.

Ben

Cool tune Ben, and I like the production work on it too.  I've got a soft spot for tunes with just a few chords that nonetheless manage to evolve and be interesting.  Fine work.

" I agree in that its an intro but I would say that it's more of an intro track for an album, then it would segue way into next the track. "


Ahhhh, "The Wall..." It is an experience, I remember the 1st time I heard it.


Today I haven't been blown (out) by 3 woman so I was able to enjoy this more. My ears were hurting the 1st time I listened to this, but this mix sounds much better to me. And the fact that the rotary is used more as an effect in this version. While it is throughout, it seems to come in and out a bit. I'm not sure what else is different (EQ?) But this is better. 

Hey Robbie the only thing I've changed is I've backed the track off by about 1 and a half DB and lessened the tube stage on my TL Audio A2.  Thanks for listening Phil.

Peace Ben

Nice one Ben. Enjoyed it.

I would say at times, the vocals were stretched way beyond their capable range. (about at the 1 minute mark). After about that duration the monotonous drone became quite boring. Need to add some changes to keep the listeners interested.

Well I decided not to write anything so I don't;-)

Hi, Ben
Nice tune based, on my first listen. Interesting stuff.