Hello everyone,
 
A new song called "Too Soon". I'd love if you'd have a listen and any advice/comments most welcome.
 
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12066026
 
Thanks

Good lyrics! Enjoyed the retro vibe and unrefined vocal performances. It’s very a gentle (in a good way) kind of treatment and it works. Solid writing. Is that a real acoustic bass - I like it? Good job!

Thanks Manny, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yeh those are first take vocals, and could probably be a little better for sure, but unrefined sounds good to me too. That is actually the "fingered bass" patch on the TTS1. Thanks again.

I'm listening...

Hey...this has a very pleasant Michael Frank vibe to it..I .like the bass sounds and notes...also I like the snare sound but there's something about the drums that don't have much 'presence' for want of a better word...is it the volume of the drums?  Other than that small crit, I enjoyed this. :)
 
Allan
 

Thanks Allan, I've alternated between bringing the drums up and down. I think I'll bring them back up a bit. Very happy to hear from you as "Pop Goes Tomorrow" has been in my head for days-loved it.

Sweetness here. I got a "Bread" vibe in the intro...as in Pieces of April. As Allan said, the drums could stand to be heard more.

  Great job here on the writing and arrangements. I think my ears are trained for drier vocals... more present, conditioned for them, so it's probably my conditioning that makes me a little uncomfortable with how the vocal sits in the mix.Good vocals though.
 
I agree with the crits about the drums being back in the mix but they aren't extremely so. You have an excellent tune here!

Interesting, not what I expected. But this would be difficult to expect? Gave me more of a Randy Newman vibe :-)

 I like this tune and performances a bunch....there are a few things about the production that still need a bit of tweaking I think. Perhaps some high pass filters on the guitar tracks? Something about the low end reflections on the reverb seem to be making a tad bit of mud. JMO...A really cool tune as is though I enjoyed.